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Escaped Relatives
Who steals my purse steals trash
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Unfortunately, not all relative clauses stay neatly lodged in the
postmodifying slot after the noun they modify. Sometimes they escape to
the end of the sentence, where they may even follow some noun they
obviously don't modify. This allows one to avoid excessively long subject
noun phrases with too much stuff between the simple subject (head noun)
and the verb with which it is supposed to agree.
Heavy Subjects. In theory, an English noun phrase could be
infinitely long, with postmodifiers tacked on to each other in an endless
chain, like one of those fractions whose decimal points stretch out into
infinity--the technical term here is recursive. We can take a
childish pleasure in such sentences:
(1) This is the cat that ate the rat that ate the
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In sentence (1), the chain of restrictive relative clauses is set at the
end of the sentence. When they come earlier in the sentence, however,
they are a good deal less lovable. Because English has denuded itself of
most inflections, our ability to understand English sentences depends a
good deal on word order. Excessively long noun phrases, especially those
which are or include clauses, can interfere with our ability to do so.
They are particularly noxious in the subject position, since they contain
verbs which we might mistake for the main verbs, and even more so when
combined with smaller predicates:
(2) The handyman who cleans our gutters out every fall
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Extraposed Relative Clauses. In such sentences, a big fat
subject sits atop a poor little predicate, squashing the life out of it.
English allows us to extrapose the relative clauses which create
the problem, moving them to a new position at the end of the main clause,
where they may or may not sound better:
(3) The handyman is here who cleans our gutters
out every fall.
(4) An idea occurs to me which with God's
blessing may put us right.
(5) Now some players are available which play
both CDs and MP3 formats. | | |
Extraposition of relative clauses out of subject noun phrases is
the most common form. Extraposition from elsewhere in a clause is
acceptable but often at least as awkward as leaving an over-sized relative
clause where it is. As sentence (6) shows, relative clauses can even be
extraposed out of oversized indirect objects of sentences with
ditransitive verbs like give, though sentence (7) seems a
preferable solution in this case and others involving over-sized indirect
objects:
(6) The city gave the company a big tax which promised
to build a manufacturing plant here a big tax break. |
(7) The city gave a big tax break to the company which promised to
build a manufacturing plant here.
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The verb in sentence (8) is a complex transitive verb, taking both a
direct object and an object complement. Extraposition out of an
over-sized direct object, as in sentence (9), makes the object complement
(happy less of an after-thought but may not make the sentence
more readable. Another stylistic option is such cases is to invert the
normal order of the direct object, as in sentence (10):
(8) She will surely make the man who marries her happy.
(9) She will surely make the man happy who marries her.
(10) She will surely make happy the man who marries
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In speech we sometimes tack on extraposed relative clauses as a sort
of afterthought. In writing, they sound formal at best and just plain
awkward at worst. Use them only when they are obviously clearer than the
more usual sentence order.
Sentential Relative Clauses. Extraposed relative clauses can
sometimes be confused with another kind of relative clause which occurs at
the end of sentences and has no nearby noun phrase antecedent, the
sentential relative clause. These relatives modify the entire
preceding clause, not just some noun phrase in it. They serve the
function of the disjuncts (or sentence adverbials) we
discussed under "Adverbials," commenting on the preceding statement,
rather than being part of it. While most kinds of sentence adverbials
come at the beginning of a sentence, these sentential relative clauses
come after the clause to which they refer. They are usually punctuated
with a comma or dash in front of them. Because clauses aren't living
creatures, these relatives are headed by which rather than
who. The usual form is the simple which, as in (11)
below. It can also be used in various combination forms as in (12) or
even (13):
(12) The lark is on the wing, which is normal for
larks.
(13) He may yet be elected president, in which
case I am moving to Canada.
(14) They lost badly, which result pleased me no
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Exercise 1: Recognizing Sentential Relatives
Say whether the following unpunctuated sentences have sentential relative
clauses:
2.01 Harriet said I was the best kisser ever which
I of course believed.
2.02 It was probably the best kiss which she had that
week.
2.03 Even so Harriet was the first which is why I
remember her so vividly.
2.04 I have no idea which girl I kissed next.
2.05 A merciful memory has blotted out a great many
memories which would embarrass me.
2.06 I believe in fact that a bad memory is a great
asset.
2.07 Cornerbacks cannot dwell on plays which found them
out of position.
2.08 They need to stay immersed in the present which
requires their complete attention.
2.09 Dwelling on past mistakes would only weaken morale
and attention which would lead to more
errors.
2.10 There will be time enough to review them on
film next week which will be tough
enough on the ego.
2.11 No good could come of recalling my love-life
post-Harriet which was not that lively
anyway.
2.12 I cannot even remember the first time I got
to "first base" the definition of which seems
to have changed radically since
my youth in any case.
2.13 It wasn't with Harriet I know for at
heart she was as naive as I was which
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Nominal Relative Clauses. In the exercise above, the relative
clauses at the end of sentences are all either postmodifying relative
clauses (adjectivals modifying a noun) or sentential relatives (adverbials
commenting on the preceding clause). To make life just a bit harder,
relative clauses can also serve nominal functions in a sentence, with the
important exception of those headed by the relative pronoun that.
Verbs
like know and wonder regularly take such nominal
relatives as their direct objects:
(13) I know who my friends are.
(14) I wonder which excuse he will give this time.
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Nominal relatives (also known as free relatives) can also occur
as subjects of sentences. In such cases, it is not hard to distinguish
them from other uses of relative clauses, but they can be mistaken for
questions, since the WH-pronouns used in relative clauses can serve as
interrogative pronouns as well. Relative pronouns like whoever
and whichever may be somewhat clearer in some such cases.
(15) Who steals my purse steals trash.
(16) Which team will win is hard to say.
(17) Whoever steals my purse steals trash.
(18) Whichever team will win is fine by me.
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Exercise 3: Nominal Relatives
Do the following sentences have nominal (free) relatives. If so, what
function are they serving?
3.01 Who would have thought it?
3.02 She had dumped a man who was clearly
too good for her.
3.03 I wondered who was taking my place.
3.04 Which was to blame was not the question.
3.05 Who was dumping who was what concerned me most.
3.06 Who did she think she was.
3.07 People want to know which one dumped the other.
3.08 Who gets dumped is trash.
3.09 Which of my friends already knew seemed
pretty important.
3.10 Whoever gets their story in first has a
great advantage. | | | | | | | | | |
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A Nominal Relative Tree. We'll draw the PS for a nominal
relative like sentence (3) in pretty much the same way as for a
post-modifying relative, except that the CP of which it is a part is now the
whole of the subject NP rather than a complement within it:
Just for the Record--Extraposed Nominal Relatives. Nominal
relatives can also be extraposed. We'll discuss how this is done a bit
later.
How Much of This Will be on
the Test? This completes our discussion of relative
clauses. You should be able to identify any relative clauses in a
sentence and say whether they are restrictive relative clauses in a
normal postmodifying position, non-restrictive relative clauses in
a normal postmodifying position, extraposed relative clauses,
sentential relative clauses, or nominal relative clauses (free
relatives) serving as a subject or direct object. Any other terms
used here can be looked up in the Glossary. |